Monday, 28 February 2011

Revenge is the next plan!

 Eygpt was a wonderful place to be in. For me anyway, im origonly from Eygpt. But i left its changed so much since i was gone. I kept on staring into the distance, i remembered the time i was in the hospital, my life was hanging on a thread.
 Hospital was a horrible place, one of my closest friends couldnt come, but i had Ocean&Angel, also a brand new baby boy. I stoped thinking about that for a minute, i saw him "Derrick" I said softly, why would he bring me to Eygpt.
Derrick: Remember me?
Me: Yes, unfortuntly i do, got rid of the goth look i see?
Derrick: No, it was the only thing that reminded me of the gorgeous think infront of me!
Me: No Derrick not now!!!
Derrick: Kiss me, then i'll give you your ticket to go home. With that guy you like...
Me: Fine. Oh and that guy has a name, Its Ocean Cooper!
 I kissed him and felt nothing, i withdrawed from his lips, i looked into his eyes.
Me: Ok now where's my ticket?
Derrick: Pfft, im not giving you of all people a ticket. I just wanted a kiss.
Me: Oh really now?
 Me: YOU JERK DERRICK! Why did i ever nearly have everything with you?!!? A happy family, a child our own house! Everything and our little boy or girl that i had to give up! I loved you once -I felt a tear run down my cheek wiped away by Derrick-
Derrick: I still love you, Louise! It was your fault everything went wrong-
Me: Dont you dare say that! Its was both our faults! We were two depressed teen goths, one pregnant and one doing whatever he wanted! It was'nt right!
 Derrick: Ok fine, how bout we just go around Eygpt for a while maybe some tomb exploring?
Me: Fine. No funny business, i mean no funny bussiness!
 I got ahead of Derrick in no time, i was used to the hot weather in Eygpt, my family stayed in Eygpt, i never knew my parents i was adopted as a teen, thats what made me go into a gothic girl. My father always wanted a boy and he never ever wanted a girl.
 Derrick: You sure thats safe?
Me: Derrick ive been exploring tombs ever since i was a child to a teen before i was sent away, you ask some really silly questions sometimes!
Derrick: I know, I 'i am who i am!'
 Me: See nothing bad has happend, no rock has fallen, no earthquake no nothing!
Derrick: I see that.
 I walked inside the tomb, i wanted to pull a trick on Derrick. I screamed.
"LOUISE!" Derrick shouted. "Haha! LOL Derrick!"
 We walked into the tomb, there was flames and statues, and pools i had a idea in mind.
 Derrick: You look hot in a swimsuit!!!
Me: Be quiet Derrick, no need for that!
 I did all the physical stuff, He just stood on a foot thing! : P
 "Eww bugs!" I heard Derrick laughing quite evily, i ignored him like i should, i found a switch, that opens the staircase to the next floor.
 I heard a person run out of the tomb, the tomb door shut and a pretend scream. Derrick has locked me inside a tomb with nothing no food or water, well i had those bread things! : D
 I started to think about Ocean, but i had to stop thinking about him and start thinking of how im going to get out of this tomb. I heard the crackle of lightning strike around me, it was only a trap.
 I walked into a room, it was gorgeous i still remember these tombs. I suddenly thought of a way to get me out there was a trap door somewhere in this tomb to get me out, but i can't remember where.
  I jumped inside the Violet pool, i thought it was the right way to get closer to the trap door.
   I also remembered that it was'nt the right way out, i was mistaken i had to keep searching the tomb for the door.
  "YAY I FOUND IT" I was getting happy i thought i found the door...
   I found a bathroom, its better than a mummy or Derrick or a ghost right? Derrick was the worst!
 I also found a keystone to hopefully get me closer to the secret door.
 I always hated this maze i nearly got burned sevrel times.
    I got through the maze in no time at all! YAY ME!
     I broke down a couple of rubble piles and found no door.
I found a huge staircase i knew i was getting closer.
    I saw the soulpiece that i always rememberd for its beauty.
 I found a trapdoor finally i maybe might be able to get out of this tomb.
 I was out! I was overjoyed finally freedom is mine! But i needed to do more things here before i left here for good. I hoped on my motorbike and rushed to the town.
   I ran as quick as I could to the old market where i grew up playing jump rope and so much fun games with old friends that i havent seen since i was a teen.
 Me: OMG! Brian? Is that you?!!?
B: LOUISE! Its been so long we need to catch up!
Me: Well i cant i really need to go, see ya!
 I could'nt belive i saw Brian one of my old friends.
    I gave myself a makeover do you like my new look?
 I had things here that i needed to do before i left i ran until it was Dawn
I kept on running up a hill i could see what i was looking for. 
 I stared at the grave, i could'nt belive it. My father...was gone. Julian Owen was gone for good, i was never told about this, i could feel myself slowly sinking. I felt tears running down my face...
 I discovered many things in my life but this was the worst, what about my mother, i could not find her grave or her house in Eygpt, she was somewhere trying to get away from me.
 I looked out into Eygpt, i saw the spinx. He was gone....
 I got a call off Ocean he said he bought me a ticket for me to come back to sunset vally. 
It was good to be home.
I could see my house...
I ran as fast as i could.
It was also party time!
Here is Peter.
Here is Joe.
Here is Rebekah.
 Here is Jacob.
Here is Lewis.

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